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Why have you extended this footpath on to existing streets? There's really no need to add separate ways for this.

Welcome to OSM.
Is that bridleway really called "Street Path"? Odd name and an odd place for a bridleway.

Welcome to OpenStreetMap. Just a few comments on your first edit though.
There's no footpath or leisure park anything like that in Broadmoor as far as I know. Have those houses been demolished recently? Footpath seems a little unlikely too.
The Saundersfoot path is a little erratic and doesn't connect to the existing road as would be needed for correct routing by satNav devices.

Since there's been no reply I've removed the school.

This school closed about 10 years ago. This needs reverting. The new school is already mapped about a mile to the east of here.

This looks like an error to me. Did you mean to add a new tag with the name in your language?

So is the accountant's office building called 'car hire' or is there a car hire company in this building as well as an accountant?

Welcome to open street map. I have a question though. It seems unlikely that there's a courthouse on this junction. Are you sure this is correct.

Since Windle Bleak Hill is already mapped. Maybe tourism=attraction would be better attached to the existing feature?

This now has two names. Is it name=Asda or name:en=CoOp?

I lived there for 8 years. Can't say I found it attractive. :) Though the dunes are cool.
That bit on the end where the dunes are is called Ynyslas

In which case they should be tagged as in natural=dune

Is this a building named "Sand Dunes"?

Is this really called "v" in Amharic? This seems a little unlikely but I'm no language expert.

This appears to be a car park.

Hi There

Welcome to OSM.

A small issue concerning your edit though. Your traffic calming node on Morlay Street seems now to be attached to the north end of Silex Street. Can you fix this or should the changeset be reverted?

Your shop appears to be in the middle of the High Street.

Highways are mapped as just lines not areas. As described at highway=footway and should not be used for areas.

Is the name this road really "Driveway"? Seems unlikely to me.

Old Mill lane seems to join the orphaned piece of Patten's Walk.